Working through The Wasteland the vignettes pop viscerally into view and become almost tangible, inhabited by the reader. In a few simple lines, “The Red Wheelbarrow” fills the frame with a still-life of “a red wheel/ barrow/ glazed with rain/ water/ beside the white/chickens” which is now so large as to command our attention (Williams 294-295). Elevating the everyday is an aspect of modernism that William Carlos Williams exemplifies in all his poetry.
William Carlos Williams can’t really move away too far from what T.S. Eliot began, because to do so would require the author to lay out his own emotions and perspectives on the scene he created. Yet this layering of the author’s emotion, even if subdued or minimal, would put just enough of a barrier or buffer between the reader and the image as to move the poem out of the realm of the imagistic that he was attempting to create. William Carlos Williams did not go along with T. S. Eliot’s classical allusions and formalistic structure, but he did follow Eliot’s preference for the universal essence of the image.
A red wheelbarrow
In an article titled "The Progression of William Carlos Williams' Use of Imagery", Hyun-Young Cho discusses William Carlos Williams’ use of imagery in his poetry and he suggests that although Williams begins (in his earlier poems like “The Red Wheelbarrow”) with a studied lack of emotion and authorial presence, as he moved into his later pieces Williams let down some of those structural defenses and infused his longer poems with a great deal of his own emotions. “Gradually, the speaker’s narration began to dominate his long prose-like poems written during the 1940s-’50s. “The Sparrow” reflects this radical progression Williams went through as a poet.” (Cho). What happens in the later poems is that rather than forcing the reader to confront the text alone and mediate the images for himself, the reader must also deal with the presence of the narrator’s voice, perspective and opinion as part of the whole.
This layer moves the image into a more emotional realm, something that “The Red Wheelbarrow” tried very hard to avoid.This is similar to Eliot’s narrative voice which shows through in The Wasteland as he faces adversity in his personal life. His marriage was very troubled at the time he wrote The Wasteland, and his wife was committed to an asylum. In addition to marital struggles, Eliot was dealing with the death of his father as well as the death of a close friend of his, Jean Verdenal, in World War I. Also, Eliot had “passed his thirtieth year” and some view The Waste Land as a “memorial to his youth” (Norton 461).
Works Cited:
Cho, Hyun-Young (2003). "The Progression of William Carlos Williams’ Use of Imagery" (PDF). Writing for a Real World 4: 62–69. http://www.usfca.edu/rhetcomp/journal/cho2003.pdf.
Ramazani, Jahan; Ellman, R; & O’Clair, R. The Norton Anthology of Modern and Contemporary Poetry. WW Norton & Company: New York. 2003. 461.
Williams, William Carlos. “The Red Wheelbarrow.” The Norton Anthology of Modern and Contemporary Poetry. WW Norton & Company: New York. 2003. 294-295.
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